Ps2 dilemma By Ryan,Nathan and Jamie

 

 

 

 

 

narrator: There are three brothers Bobby, Jimmy and James. They are all fighting over the playstation 2.

 

Jimmy: I wanna play!!

Bobby:but youve been on ALL day.

Jimmy:neh-et

Bobby:but its mine

James:stop arguing!!

Narrator:bobby and jimmy are arguing

Bobby and Jimmy  both turning round in surprise

James:Finnaly! you've stopped!(Phew)

Jimmy:I'm still going on.

Bobby:No you're not.

James:(ugh..for peeps sake)Shut up!

Narrator:Bobby and Jimmy are to busy arguing so James goes on the PS2.Bobby snatches the controller.

James:whit ye da--in!moron.

Bobby:You're the moron.

Narrator:James pushes Bobby

Bobby pushes James into the t.v and the PS2 breaks so they both get grounded.

 

                                        The Easter Bunny

 

Every year at Easter a bunny hides Easter eggs.They have a competion to see who can find the eggs.Whoever finds the most eggs wins the competion.There are 20 eggs.There was this one rabbit called Roger.He entered every year but never won.So his mum said to him,"If you want to win try and eat more carrots." Then Roger said,"Mum i eat 5 carrots a day and that is part of my 5 a day." So Roger entered the competion and on the day,Mr Teeth said 3...2...1 go.So all the rabbits ran and started looking for the eggs. Roger was running as fast as he could.He found one egg and kept on running.Before the race finished roger had 15 eggs.The horn went and then they counted the eggs and they shouted we have a winner.The winner is Roger.Roger was so happy.So he went home and said,"Mum Mum i won the competion."Then Roger's Mum said," Well done Roger I knew you could do it."So Roger got to hold the competions from now on.Roger always told the kid Rabbits if you want to win eat all your fruit and vegtables.

 

 

By Ryan                  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                                             Angela

 

 

 

When me and Daniel got back home Angela was there. She asked us to join her on pulling pranks I said yes and Daniel said no.So me and Angela went to the hotel.We went to the front desk and said,"We've lost our mummy." So the man went outside and we locked him out.

                    When the man was outside Daniel came.Daniel said,"Let that man in."We said to Daniel,"NO." Daniel smashed the window and the man came in.He chased us round the hotel .We hid in room 26.The man ran passed and we ran outside.Then Angela said,"That was the best prank ever." Daniel was there  and said,"That wasn't funny." We just ran away.We ran to the park.There was some kids there and they had sweets.Angela went up to them and knocked the sweets out their hands.They went and told their mums.

                     The mum's chased us and Angela found some rope so she got me to hold one side.So the mums came running and we pulled the rope and they fell.I said to Angela,"This is to much i'm not sure if i want to do this anymore." Angela yelled,"DON'T BACK OUT!!!!" Then I said ,"ok i'll pull more pranks." Angela said,"That's good." So Angela and I pulled more pranks.When we went to the bushes with eggs Daniel was walking past with his cousin Adam.So when they walked pass,we flung eggs at them and ran away.Then Daniel started crying.

                         Then Daniel went to my door and said,"Mrs Livingston Ryan and Angela have just threw eggs at me." Then my mum said,"Right i will speak to him." We kept on pulling pranks.We went to Mrs Moore's door and flung cakes at her.Then i said,"I'm getting bored."Then Daniel came and hit Angela.So then I kicked Daniel.So me and Angela ran off.Angela then said," Thanks Ryan." Then i said,"No problem." So we found this new hotel and we flung food everywhere.We poured sugar everywhere and flung food in the room's.So then we went to our neighbour hood.

                    Then i said to Angela,"I'm quiting i'm not doing this anymore." So i went home and then i moved house and made new friends.Then when i settled in ,Angela moved to my street and disaster struck.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Magic Box

 

It was a stormy night in London and a very old lady was sitting in her chair. She couldn't get to sleep neither could her dog. So Nanny went up stairs and went to bed and her dog followed. Nanny woke up next day and said,"We will go for a walk". So Nanny went to the park with her dog and saw some kids mucking around. It was a big gang and one of them said,"Hey look at the old one over there". Nanny heard but kept walking on. She went to the graveyard. She said,"Joke only if you were here". Nanny went back home, when she arrived back home the door bell went. It was trick or treaters. Then the gang of boys came the leader is called Kyle and he said,"Remember us listen you if you do anything to us again we will do something to you. "Then Nanny said "b-b-b-ut I never done anything." Then they walked away. That night Nanny named her dog Lucky. Then she went back to the graveyard and when she was there she found a box. It looked brand new. Nanny picked it up and ran home the boys seen her run home. So she slept it off over night.She woke up went down stairs and the boys were sitting there. Kyle said "Give us our box." "No" said Nanny. So Jamie ran grabbed it and then ran of with it Nanny chased them. They ran down the street,through the park and through the forest then she jumped on the boys and took the box.

 

Chapter 2

She ran for her life while the boys chased her. Nanny tripped up. When she got up she saw a massive house. She ran in. She looked around and found an attic. She went up and saw the boys. She opened the box and a little Leprachaun came out. It said to Nanny,"Hiya me love. "Nanny got shocked. It said"You got three wishes my love. "Nanny flung the Leprachaun back in the box and closed it. The boys were in the house. Kyle said,"We know your here. "Nanny hid in the bathroom in the attic. The boys came in the attic and nanny ran out knocked over the boxes and ran down stairs but when she was running she fell through the stairs. She found a little exit but decided to stay in there. Kyle got up and said,"How are we meant to get down there?" Another boy Jamie said,"Just jump the old yin will be down there." So they jumped.Nanny ran for it she went out the door she ran and ran.She eventualy found a clothes shop she went in changed her clothes then ran to the wig shop and put on a fake wig. The boys were there and they said, " where is she?" They went up to Nanny and said,"Have you seen a old lady about in town." Then Nanny said to them,"No and respect your elders." Then Nanny ran went home opened the box then she said,"My first wish will be....

 

Chapter 3

 

I wish that I could live a happy life and not be misserable." Then he said, "Your wish will be granted in two days." So Nanny, waited there was a knock on the door she looked out the spy hole and it was the boys. Nanny then said,"Get lost never come back get lost get lost." They broke the door and came in. She ran and said to the Leprachaun,"My second wish is I wish they are good boys. "Two days me love" She ran up stairs and said,"Why do you want this box." Kyle said,"It belonged to my grandfather Joke". Nanny then said," Joke was my husbands name." They made the last wish together.The Leprachaun had a hunch what there wish would be. So they wished that they never met him.He said,"Why would you do that to me?" Then Nanny said,"because all the trouble you caused."So he ran away and shouted,"You'll never catch me."So they all chased after him they caught up with him and put him back in the box. Nanny put the box in a cupboard. It was five years later and Nanny was cleaning her house and she went in the cupboard and seen a box. It was all dusty and Nanny cleaned the box and then left it and locked the cupboard. It was two days later and Kyle and Jamie came to the door.Nanny went to the cupboard and got the box and said to Kyle and Jamie,"Do you know what this box is?" Then Kyle replied,"Yes it is that Leprachaun." So that very same day Nanny,Kyle and Jamie took Lucky for a walk and they took the box. They smashed the box and flung all the left overs in the river and forgot about the box and lived their lifes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Magic Box Self-Evaluation

I enjoyed reading my story but some was good and some bits were boring.

The bits what i enjoyed the most was when the leprachaun has a hunch about their wish.

The words that describe my story best are exciting and funny.

I think it is exciting because they have to try and get rid of the leprachaun.

I think it is funny because the boys chased the Nanny.

The part what i liked best was when the boys chased the Nanny over a box.

Yes i am pleased with my beginning because it is the first beginning of my first imagitive story in P7.

I think the story line is easy and to simple to follow

If you like my story please leave a comment.

 

 

 

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